Have you
heard of the term, “synecdoche”? I challenge you to look it up and enjoy Annette’s inventive
use of this literary device to create a dynamic picture of the stages of her
life.
Through the
undulating canal
They followed the
lead of my head
These feet kicked
These feet squirmed
Toddling unsure
forward
They followed the
lead of my head
These feet rocked
These feet rolled
Running fast with
pure joy
Tripping over my glee
These feet flew
These feet danced
Tramping down prairie
grass rooms
Wriggling like worms
in warm sand
These feet giggled
These feet tickled
Pushing into bike
pedals
With splendiferous
abandon
These feet turned
These feet spun
Protesting against
cold stirrups
Agonizing thrusts
against pain
These feet delivered
These
feet carried
Some day these feet
will again toddle
Instead of pushing
they’ll slide
These feet are
glorious inventions
Thank you God for
these feet
Thank you for
making me so wonderfully complex!
Your workmanship
is marvelous – and how well I know it.
Psalms 139:14
(NLT)
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I love this one...they are glorious inventions!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwe so true, our feet so eager to take us on life's journies serving us well will one day only shuffle us along from chair to chair. Glorious inventions! Glorious creations!
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ReplyDeleteAnnette, love your feet poem! so talented.
Ginger
Annette, I appreciate your style of writing that conveys shadows and light in any given subject, what is, what was, and what can be again.
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